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Post by DasuketheArcher on May 16, 2016 21:50:46 GMT -5
Alright, so. First things first. The teleportation attacks, Dark Vanish and Dark Step. I have no issues with using teleportation as a means of dodging, but the descriptions of them are so vague that I have no idea how they work. Do they just vanish instantly like Renamon? Go through a portal quickly? Is it a slow fade and that's why they can get hit? What happens if they do they get hit? Does the teleportation stop, or do they get hurt in the spot they were going to? Please clear that up.
Next up is Dark Creation. He's a MetalGarurumon, not Green Lantern. So that's gotta go completely. Just doesn't make sense.
Ergo Sphere is very poorly worded. I'm not sure what you're trying to say with it. Does the user teleport through the portal? Does he use the portal to catch an attack and throw it back or diffuse it entirely? What do you mean it still does damage?
Finally, Gate of Niflheim. I guess the concept is there, the whole portal thing like HolyAngemon, but there is no "frozen hell". It would send them to the Dark Area and then they are GranDracmon's problem if we decide to do that. Realistically, we'll just chalk them up as dead.
That's all I can think of for now.
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Post by SoltheGuilmon on May 18, 2016 19:21:50 GMT -5
Death X Metal Garurumon: Dark Creation: Can make weapons and objects out of shadows and darkness. They are weak to light based attacks meaning thwt can be destroyed more easily by light. The objects and weapons each have a certain amount of durability. Weapons tend to have more offensive durability while objects tend to be walls and such that have more deffensive ability. He can create moveable objects such as spikes of darkness but that has a reach limit and is even less durable and can be destroyed easily. Can only create each weapon once per battle.
Sol's Response: I'm not approving this attack. Not only is it overpowered, it also does not fit this character style.
Dark Destruction Bomb: Forms a giant dark sphere of dark energy and throws it at his enemy as it explodes on impact freezing anything it touches. This does not auto freeze enemys on contact for enemys it's more like being hit by a blizzard and has a 25% chance to temporarily freeze the enemy. It is weak against fire and fire users.
Sol's response: This could be better worded, but I have no qualms with this attack.
Ergo Sphere: A Black vortex that can teleport the user or teleport an enemy attack the user chooses the locations it sends attacks still takes some damage. If the attack is redirected at the user the damage it causes is halfed and has a limited range. Its power is unusable against light attacks aka it can not teleport light attacks. This can only be used to send back attacks onxce per battle and can not send back extremely powerful attacks like Terra force. Also has a 300 yard radious.
Sol's response: This also needs to be better worded, I cannot grasp fully what you're trying to say here. I have an idea but it's not enough to go on.
Death Kaizer Nail: a claw attack that sends off dark energy that can even cut through chromdigizoid. It can also be used as an enhanced claw attack at close range. The power of the attack lowers with the amount of damage the user has taken.
Sol's Response: I have no problems with this attack at all. Though whether it can cut through Chrome digizoid will be determined by level difference.
Gate of Niflheim: A gate that suck in a finished enemy and sends them to a frozen hell. The gate even creates a frozen area around it. Can only be used on a defeated enemy.
Sol's Response: I will be honest. I hate this attack a lot. It does not fit the character style at all. Niflheim has nothing to do with frozen anything and the only digimon able to open up dimensions to hell, are those that reside there to begin with.
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Post by Deleted on May 19, 2016 11:05:20 GMT -5
I may get rid of the gate and save it for void garurumon and split dark creation into two seperate attacks one for objects and one for weapons or maybe keep that as it is and make a wolf creation of ice not sure
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Post by Deleted on May 19, 2016 21:27:02 GMT -5
Also made a redesign to the wings
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Post by Deleted on Oct 23, 2016 17:02:01 GMT -5
Still need someone here
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Post by SoltheGuilmon on Oct 23, 2016 19:49:49 GMT -5
What's left to be done?
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Post by Deleted on Oct 23, 2016 19:51:49 GMT -5
Idk an aproval and such other than that idk.
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Post by SoltheGuilmon on Oct 23, 2016 19:53:23 GMT -5
Can you post everything you changed, up to this point in your next reply? I don't wanna surf through everything. Post for all forms.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 23, 2016 20:06:16 GMT -5
The attacks were the parts we were discussing. Death X Gabumon attacks: Petit Fire: Shoots a stream of red flame. Little Horn: Rams the horn on its head into the foe. Blue Fire: Shoots a stream of blue fire. Ice Dash: Dashes and leaves a trail of icicles that freeze those who touch them. Skull Driller: Drops straight down horn-first, stunning the enemy Death X garurumon Fox fire: Breathes out icy blue flames. Ice Fang: a tackle then freezing bite attack that can be repeated. Dark Vanish: A dissapearance attack where he dissapears and reappears at a location of his choice but still can be hit during it. Slasher Tackle: An attack where he charges past his enemy cutting them with the blades on his back. Death X Weregarurumon: Kaizer Nail: Slashes at the opponent with its powerful claws. Baldy Blow: a powerful punch attack. Full circle moon kick: a power ful kick attack. Shadow slasher: A slash that sends dark energy waves flying at its enemy. Dark step: A teleporting step similar to dark vanish but can still be hit during the middle of it although it is harder to hit. Death X Metal Garurumon: Dark Creation: Can make weapons and objects out of shadows and darkness. They are weak to light, fire, wind, and electricity based attacks meaning that can be destroyed more easily by these elements. The objects and weapons each have a certain amount of durability. Weapons tend to have more offensive durability while objects tend to be walls and such that have more deffensive ability. He can create moveable objects such as spikes of darkness but that has a reach limit and is even less durable and can be destroyed easily. Darke creation is on par with Steel, Dark, and Ice type attacks and are steong against water, earth, and wood. The weapons are like plane sharp metal weapons they have no magical ability other than they are extremly cold. There are also only do mamy weapons he can make such as scyths, Throwing Knives, Dual magnum revolvers, Sniper rifle, and great swords. Objects are limited to shields, Walls, and Spikes. When used for weapons it is more of a create a regular weapon and change fighting style type power. Can only create 5 weapons per battle.
Dark Destruction Bomb: Forms a giant dark sphere of dark energy and throws it at his enemy as it explodes on impact freezing anything it touches. This does not auto freeze enemys on contact for enemys it's more like being hit by a blizzard and has a 25% chance to temporarily freeze the enemy. It is weak against fire and fire users.
Ergo Sphere: A Black spinning circular vortex that can teleport the user or teleport an enemy attacks the user chooses the locations it sends attacks still takes some damage. Which means if the attack burns he still gets burnt the only attacks this effect is immune to is Ice and dark attacks. If the attack is redirected at the user the damage it causes is halfed and has a limited range. Its power is unusable against light attacks aka it can not teleport light attacks. This can only be used to send back attacks once per battle and can not send back extremely powerful attacks like Terra force. The teleportation can only be used in a 250 yard diameter. This means that he can teleport himself anywhere within a circle of 250 yards.
Death Kaizer Nail: a claw attack that sends off dark energy that can even cut through chromdigizoid although this dependa on level. It can also be used as an enhanced claw attack at close range. The power of the attack lowers with the amount of damage the user has taken.
Gate of Niflheim: A gate that suck in a finished enemy and sends them to a deep frozen underground cavern found in the digital Tundra. This cavern has very few entrances and almost no exits. The gate creates a frozen area around it That is slick but mostly for show because the inside of the cavern is so cold that it even sucks the heat out of things around the gate. Can only be used on a defeated enemy.
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Post by SoltheGuilmon on Oct 24, 2016 17:00:06 GMT -5
The two attacks I still have an issue with is Gate of Niflheim and Dark Creation. If you want this approved. Get rid of Dark Creation and change Gate of Niflheim, I made my points with these in earlier replies.
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