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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2016 19:49:23 GMT -5
Ok as everyone probably knows by now for my dark evolution line on my partner bio i am making death X evolutions for gabumon keep in mind that I will be using the X evolutions as bases except for on metal garurumon because i dont like the gun or the design i will be using death x dorugoramon as the base.
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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2016 19:50:26 GMT -5
This is the first evolution Death X garurumon or what i have so far. Death X Garurumon has a metal mask and keeps the garurumon X symbols his mask is black with white marking and a gold dimond on the foor head. The back of the mask has 3 points one straight back and two to the sides next to his ears they are decently long it only covers the top half of his face and head not his bottom jaw. The blades on his back become black and have gold rings on the back side the red lines on each side become gold. The edges of the back blades being white. His shin guards are black with spikes all around it. And gold rings on all his ankles. His tail has multiple gold rings all around it with a gold spike tip at the end of the tail each ring has black markings in the shape of magidramon's marking. His fur is black with some white stripes his ears have gold ring ear peircings that have spikes hanging down similar to Death X dorugreymon's wing peircings. His claws and teeth are pure white his eyes a dark red. He also has black shoulder armor with more gold markings as said earlier.
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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2016 20:28:31 GMT -5
Ok weregarurumon im not as sure about but here goes. His fur is black the stripes and neck fur is white. His mask is the same as Death X Garurumons including the ear peircings. His armor is black except for the lines in the armor which are gold he has a white skull on his belt. Plus white edges on his spikes on his back. He has gold rings around his ankles and wrists. His collar is gold with spikes. The spike lines on the edge of his vest like metal are gold. His eyes are red just like death x garurumon. He also gets susanoomon's arch and tassels with the red edges of the tassels being black instead. His knees get spikes where the points are. His tail has the same layout as Death X garurumon. He also gets the evil evolution symbol on his chest in gold. This is the so far if needed i will post a picture of the symbol and arch.
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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2016 21:13:12 GMT -5
The arch includes the tassels on the shoulders
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Post by Deleted on May 13, 2016 16:52:59 GMT -5
Ok as I said before the base of death X metal garurumon is death X dorugoramon. First switch the head and neck to the of metal garurumon X the gold hair becomes white the mask gets the same markings from the Death X Garurumon and is the same colors even having the gold dimond. His ears have the same gold ear rings as the other two linimg the back of his ears in the same way. The tail stops being a sphere at the end gold rings appear up and down it with the usual gold tip. His hands are the same as weregarurumon x. The red spikes all over death x dorugoramon's body become white. The purple armor becomes black he also gets the megidramon mark on his chest in gold. He gets gold rings around his wrists and ankles and on his upper arms. His arms are slightly thicker than Dorugoramon's do to the hand change. He has two giant dragon wings become that are black with white stipes and the gold megidramon symbol and they all become retractable so that he doesn't always have them out they look like a black and white striped pancho with a hood when retracted. He also has the gold arch and tassles like death X weregarurumon the tips of the tassles being black. And the back of his hands and the tops of his feet have gold gems like his foor head.
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Post by Dantelion on May 14, 2016 12:18:48 GMT -5
Okay first thought. Spikes everywhere. Make him a porcupine.
That aside I look at it and can't imagine it. It is jumbled together. I recommend making paragraphs. One for the head, one for the body, arms, legs, clothing/armor, etc. That way a person isn't overwhelmed.
What I can imagine looks nice. The collar around weregarurumons neck. The earrings, mask .... etc. It is mainly the spines and blades. I can't imagine where they were placed.
WHERE ARE ALL THE PERIODS. It is just one run-on sentence.
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Post by Deleted on May 14, 2016 12:22:29 GMT -5
I was only going for description actual scentences wasnt the goal and garurumon X is the base thats where the blades are from
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Post by Deleted on May 14, 2016 12:23:03 GMT -5
And im using dorumon death x line as refrence and each have lots of spikes
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Post by Deleted on May 15, 2016 11:47:07 GMT -5
Ok so death x garurumon and death X weregarurumon have the same attacks as their X antibody forms. Plus a few new attacks that i will make. And death X metal garurumon will be a completly made up attack list.
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Post by Deleted on May 15, 2016 12:07:29 GMT -5
Death X garurumon Fox fire: Breathes out icy blue flames. Ice Fang: a tackle then freezing bite attack that can be repeated. Dark Vanish: A dissapearance attack where he dissapears and reappears at a location of his choice but still can be hit during it. Slasher Tackle: An attack where he charges past his enemy cutting them with the blades on his back.
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Post by Deleted on May 15, 2016 12:19:36 GMT -5
Death X Weregarurumon: Kaizer Nail: Slashes at the opponent with its powerful claws. Baldy Blow: a powerful punch attack. Full circle moon kick: a power ful kick attack. Shadow slasher: A slash that sends dark energy waves flying at its enemy. Dark step: A teleporting step similar to dark vanish but can still be hit during the middle of it although it is harder to hit.
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Post by Deleted on May 15, 2016 12:52:01 GMT -5
Death X Metal Garurumon: Dark Creation: Can make weapons and objects out of shadows and darkness. They are weak to light, fire, wind, and electricity based attacks meaning that can be destroyed more easily by these elements. The objects and weapons each have a certain amount of durability. Weapons tend to have more offensive durability while objects tend to be walls and such that have more deffensive ability. He can create moveable objects such as spikes of darkness but that has a reach limit and is even less durable and can be destroyed easily. Darke creation is on par with Steel, Dark, and Ice type attacks and are steong against water, earth, and wood. The weapons are like plane sharp metal weapons they have no magical ability other than they are extremly cold. There are also only do mamy weapons he can make such as scyths, Throwing Knives, Dual magnum revolvers, Sniper rifle, and great swords. Objects are limited to shields, Walls, and Spikes. When used for weapons it is more of a create a regular weapon and change fighting style type power. Can only create 5 weapons per battle.
Dark Destruction Bomb: Forms a giant dark sphere of dark energy and throws it at his enemy as it explodes on impact freezing anything it touches. This does not auto freeze enemys on contact for enemys it's more like being hit by a blizzard and has a 25% chance to temporarily freeze the enemy. It is weak against fire and fire users.
Ergo Sphere: A Black spinning circular vortex that can teleport the user or teleport an enemy attacks the user chooses the locations it sends attacks still takes some damage. Which means if the attack burns he still gets burnt the only attacks this effect is immune to is Ice and dark attacks. If the attack is redirected at the user the damage it causes is halfed and has a limited range. Its power is unusable against light attacks aka it can not teleport light attacks. This can only be used to send back attacks once per battle and can not send back extremely powerful attacks like Terra force. The teleportation can only be used in a 250 yard diameter. This means that he can teleport himself anywhere within a circle of 250 yards.
Death Kaizer Nail: a claw attack that sends off dark energy that can even cut through chromdigizoid although this dependa on level. It can also be used as an enhanced claw attack at close range. The power of the attack lowers with the amount of damage the user has taken.
Gate of Niflheim: A gate that suck in a finished enemy and sends them to a deep frozen underground cavern found in the digital Tundra. This cavern has very few entrances and almost no exits. The gate creates a frozen area around it That is slick but mostly for show because the inside of the cavern is so cold that it even sucks the heat out of things around the gate. Can only be used on a defeated enemy.
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Post by Deleted on May 16, 2016 15:50:49 GMT -5
Ok so I decided to make the rookie for this set and as it turns out i think it will be cool. The base is Black gabumon. He has a pancho with a hood that looks like his fur the hood has a hole for his gold horn. He has a set of goggles that are either on his hood or face similer to hackmon. He is less chubby by some with a little less stout legs he doesnt quite look different but can move faster. He has the same earings as the rest of this Death X Line. His tail also has the gold rings up and down it with a gold tail tip. He has gold rings around his wrists and ankles.
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Post by Deleted on May 16, 2016 15:59:28 GMT -5
Death X Gabumon attacks: Petit Fire: Shoots a stream of red flame. Little Horn: Rams the horn on its head into the foe. Blue Fire: Shoots a stream of blue fire. Ice Dash: Dashes and leaves a trail of icicles that freeze those who touch them. Skull Driller: Drops straight down horn-first, stunning the enemy
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Post by SoltheGuilmon on May 16, 2016 17:50:36 GMT -5
Death X Garurumon and Were Garurumon are fine. Gabumon has to many attacks, I'd decrease it to 4. Same thing with Metal Garurumon, decrease it to 4 or 5 and his attacks need to be rebalanced. A lot of them are far to vague to be approved.
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