Post by DasuketheArcher on Oct 14, 2016 21:39:33 GMT -5
Okie-day. Here's a list of crap you have to change.
1) What even is that timeline? The war I'm assuming you're referring to that set the stage for our forum hate was not against the digimon, it simply involved them. The war was completely between humans and took place completely on earth and in space around Earth.
2) I don't know what this "a few generations down the line" business is. The war was only 15 years, and there is a 5 year gap between it's end and the beginning of our story. So any teenagers would have been children during the war, and adults would have been, well, younger. Maybe teens themselves during war time. So rewind the clock a bit there.
3) There are always bad people who do bad things to digimon, but you have to be able to capture the digimon first. So you need a group that is strong enough to catch them, has a facility to hold them, and if you plan on having a Mega level as a prisoner, you better have a damn strong security force. So either lose that part or explain how they pulled it off without getting caught by the government or killed by the digimon they were trying to capture. Furthermore, you have to remember that when digimon are mortally wounded, they dissipate into data, so an autopsy or prolonged dismemberment is out of the question. The serum to freeze the data is extremely rare and only W.A.D.A. is known to possess it, which means it didn't exist during the experiments you mentioned.
4) His weapon. Unless you can find any evidence anywhere on this forum that a magic shapeshifting weapon is a thing, that idea has to be scrapped. And you won't find any because I helped design most of our weapons. You can have a rapier AND a pocket watch, but not one that can transform into both. I can totally see, later down the road, maybe a sword that can double as a gun or a bow and arrow, but you'd have to save up and probably craft that kind of weapon. But this alchemy style transformation you suggested just can't be. Humans don't have magic and magical items don't exist on earth.
5) Being allied with Dark Helix and then later recruited officially by them is fine. Just maybe clean it up a bit? Like explain why they wanted him to work them directly? Like, why would Dark Helix pull funding of these experiments (which have no stated goal, btw) if Jakob didn't join them? What made him so special?
6) Dark Helix would have limited knowledge of Xrossing. They would of course have heard of Ichi and the terror he wrought as the Xros Demon during the war, but beyond that they would only know by studying history (the Xros Wars anime/manga) Not many Xros users still exist. If you want him to study the practice and perform it later, that's totally fine.
That's about it. Thanks.
1) What even is that timeline? The war I'm assuming you're referring to that set the stage for our forum hate was not against the digimon, it simply involved them. The war was completely between humans and took place completely on earth and in space around Earth.
2) I don't know what this "a few generations down the line" business is. The war was only 15 years, and there is a 5 year gap between it's end and the beginning of our story. So any teenagers would have been children during the war, and adults would have been, well, younger. Maybe teens themselves during war time. So rewind the clock a bit there.
3) There are always bad people who do bad things to digimon, but you have to be able to capture the digimon first. So you need a group that is strong enough to catch them, has a facility to hold them, and if you plan on having a Mega level as a prisoner, you better have a damn strong security force. So either lose that part or explain how they pulled it off without getting caught by the government or killed by the digimon they were trying to capture. Furthermore, you have to remember that when digimon are mortally wounded, they dissipate into data, so an autopsy or prolonged dismemberment is out of the question. The serum to freeze the data is extremely rare and only W.A.D.A. is known to possess it, which means it didn't exist during the experiments you mentioned.
4) His weapon. Unless you can find any evidence anywhere on this forum that a magic shapeshifting weapon is a thing, that idea has to be scrapped. And you won't find any because I helped design most of our weapons. You can have a rapier AND a pocket watch, but not one that can transform into both. I can totally see, later down the road, maybe a sword that can double as a gun or a bow and arrow, but you'd have to save up and probably craft that kind of weapon. But this alchemy style transformation you suggested just can't be. Humans don't have magic and magical items don't exist on earth.
5) Being allied with Dark Helix and then later recruited officially by them is fine. Just maybe clean it up a bit? Like explain why they wanted him to work them directly? Like, why would Dark Helix pull funding of these experiments (which have no stated goal, btw) if Jakob didn't join them? What made him so special?
6) Dark Helix would have limited knowledge of Xrossing. They would of course have heard of Ichi and the terror he wrought as the Xros Demon during the war, but beyond that they would only know by studying history (the Xros Wars anime/manga) Not many Xros users still exist. If you want him to study the practice and perform it later, that's totally fine.
That's about it. Thanks.
